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9 Months To Go

its been three months, nine more to go i cant stand to see you threw a glass window it hurts so much to talk threw a phone without you here i feel so alone i go threw so much, you would'nt understand i need you here holding my hand my parents don't listen, they don't even care i just wanna let you know so that you are aware i have so much pain inside me, so much.. suicidal thoughts &' no one seems to notice that i go threw so much i've felt like this for way too long i just wish i was gone

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/27/2016 8:27:00 AM

Jazmine- firstly congrats on your fine placement! Welcome and will be looking forward to getting to know your passion :)-luloo

Jazmine Alcaraz
Date: 10/28/2016 1:04:00 AM

Thank You!

Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 3:10:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jazmine. :)

Jazmine Alcaraz
Date: 10/28/2016 1:04:00 AM

Thank You

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 2:58:00 PM

Jazmine, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Jazmine Alcaraz
Date: 10/28/2016 1:05:00 AM

Thank You So Much

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2016 12:08:00 AM

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Jazmine Alcaraz
Date: 10/28/2016 1:06:00 AM

Thank You!