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Singing for the river is a bless. The love theme’s incarnated in a dress, There are more than words that I should guess, And I won’t expect from you anything less, Just start the peace and end this mess, So I won’t make my heart to press, To commit such error to forget the stress, Oh your lips are touched by my soft tress, And I don’t know your love how to access, And neither how I should confess, If only I knew your Universe’s address… Oh I am such a damsel in distress, And all I do is to abuse in excess, And all I do is to abuse in excess, Oh I am such a damsel in distress, If only I knew your Universe’s address… And neither how I should confess, And I don’t know your love how to access, Oh your lips are touched by my soft tress, To commit such error to forget the stress, So I won’t make my heart to press, Just start the peace and end this mess, And I won’t expect from you anything less, There are more than words that I should guess, The love theme’s incarnated in a dress, Singing for the river is a bless. By Ana Bituna for the contest " Write A Backwards Poem".

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Date: 5/29/2011 4:57:00 AM
nice read.congrats. thanx. jagath
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Date: 5/25/2011 12:23:00 AM
thank you all so much!
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Anna Bituna
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Ana-Maria Bituna
Date: 5/24/2011 4:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, it's a surprise for me ! a good one Thank you all!
Date: 5/23/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations Ana-Maria on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Ana-Maria Bituna
Date: 5/23/2011 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, i am honored to have been posted here my poetry. Thank you again Carol. From Ana-Maria
Date: 5/20/2011 6:42:00 AM
What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. I hope you have a great weekend Ana-Maria. Love, Carol
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Ana-Maria Bituna
Date: 5/20/2011 1:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, and i wish you a happy weekend too.

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