9-5-13

An ogling of her scent, befuddling,
The sight of her voice, quite troubling;
The sound her eyes make, leaves me perplexed,
Her mythical touch left me vexed;
Her skillful beauty, stunning any day,
When I sensed her, it was not in the normal way;
To describe her, simply impossible,
Too many great qualities, solely irristible;
There are no sketches as lovey to illustrate,
The celebrated features, she holds innate.

9-5-13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/9/2013 9:00:00 PM
Shan, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * ...
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Shan Omeara
Date: 12/27/2015 9:57:00 PM
Hi Skat, I have only check out this sight every once in a while and have just posted a lot more of my poems. I don't get any mail regarding what I have written, only views. I have posted more poetry within the last two weeks or so. I still have tons more but don't think they are very good. It's about my first poem that was mentioned that it was in The Lyric. Does everyone get a nod for that? I can't find it the publication.. Let me know, would you? Thank you
Date: 9/8/2013 1:53:00 PM
hi Shan, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/8/2013 1:22:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Shan ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Shan Omeara
Date: 9/9/2013 2:14:00 AM
Thank you, Anne. I think I will enjoy it here. Sincecollege, the past 20 years, I have written nearly 200 poems, some good, some not so. I will post more soon. Right now, I am in the midst of moving, so for the next week or so, things will be hit or miss. It's great to know that I already have international appeal! I live in the United States, in Virginia.
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