8am Thoughts
Written January 25, 2015
The girl is broken
She wanted to be saved
And there's him;
Well mannered
A kind man
He was like an angel
Well dressed
A good man
He was like a prince
Well educated
A lover
He was like a poet
The girl is broken
She wanted to be saved
And there's him
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Did he saved the girl?
"No he's the reason why she's broken."
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