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8 minutes 20 seconds

On average it takes 8 minutes 20 seconds for light to travel between the sun and the earth.

At that very moment they look up into the sky
8 minutes and 20 seconds ago the journey had begun
The ray plays out its tale for all of them

Eyes stung by beads of sweat
The farmer squints into a cloudless sky
He smiles as once more he gazes on rows of sprouting new life

Oakley may dim her vision but she stirs
Beneath her towel sand has moulded to her sun-drenched form
Her fashionable hue is almost complete

He stumbles but struggles once more to his feet
How long has this desert ordeal endured?
The end beckons as searing heat prepares the feast

Shivering through winter in thin clothes and with an empty belly
Shafts of sunlight are rays of hope
A false dawn or a new beginning?

The newborn baby cries for attention
Her rosy skin has yellowed
But soon the status quo will be restored

Five lives touched at the same time
But not in the same way
8 minutes and 20 seconds ago it started again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Dear Simon, your unique poetic voice and perspective is expressive and impressive. Wonderful and thought-provoking poetry! Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Agustin Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 11:59 PM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Toney Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Simon, a brilliant snapshot-in-time describing how sunlight touches a farmer, a sunbather, a desert wanderer, a freezing beggar, and a newborn child. And the process continues every 8 minutes 20 seconds. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 20 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 21 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 20 Checkpoint blog post.
Rogerson Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:07 PM
Thanks Mark!
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