William Kelii Kekaula Poet Couplet

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Irked shadow's occasions a Sun,
Tolls a knell's lowly peal, begun.

Ill winds bade the palls hovering,
Time betrays caused uncovering.

Inch thoust trek thy countenance hid,
The belching rains down thoust forbid.

In looms thoust melt of Luna's lyre,
Thoust lieth in her soothing fire.

2022 August 15

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I Am Anaya August 24, 2022 at 6:36 PM Yours is a challenging contest, great example's given, Hilo Poet! Altogether, beautiful and informative, and fun couplets. ~I Am Anaya William Kelii Kekaula August 24, 2022 at 7:44 PM Yes, as I had shared with Andrea below, Anaya, it's challenging when free will is tested with a curve, thanks for sharing, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2022 at 8:55 AM thanks for the example. I want to try this contest soon!!! It's sure an interesting new form!! William Kelii Kekaula August 21, 2022 at 10:16 AM Hoping that you would, Andrea! "i" felt more productive being the inquisitive phase, and "t" would produce more thinking phases my friend, Aloha~William