Jhucel Del Rosario Poet Free verse

7:46

In the Middle of Silence
The secret illusion of yours
Starts mesmerize my mind

I don't know why, but I can't
control all articulate sounds
that comes into ,my heart

I can't control the way of my
Intellectual power
Out this lovely phrases, hoping
to catch your eyes

Then a little time apart
I decided to wrote a rhythmic composition
just to describe my love,
my agitation to you

And in exactly seven: forty six PM,
My work of heart, my poetry was
exactly complete

Later I will send it just for you
My Girl of my life,
My girl of my dreams

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Deborah Shiells May 2, 2014 at 11:01 AM Hello Jhucel, You have such talent! Wonderful write:~) Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Peace, Deborah

Aiyah Torres April 29, 2014 at 2:57 PM wew!!! who's that girl?!!! ... I hope she read this.. I'm sure she'll fall in love w/ a great poet like you ^_6 ..keep penning!!! :O)) keep it high!! ^_^ Jhucel Del Rosario May 1, 2014 at 10:34 PM Like : )

Jake Ponce April 26, 2014 at 8:36 AM The girl you're dedicating this piece to is very lucky to have you in her life. Nothing beats the feeling of receiving a heartfelt poem. This poem also feels like a short song. I can hear a melody from a guitar being strummed on a sunny day as I'm reading it. \m/ Aiyah Torres April 29, 2014 at 2:57 PM Hi jake ..:O)) Jhucel Del Rosario April 27, 2014 at 8:33 PM yeah.. I will try to accompany this with a guitar.. Thanks for the Idea BRO