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In the Middle of Silence The secret illusion of yours Starts mesmerize my mind I don't know why, but I can't control all articulate sounds that comes into ,my heart I can't control the way of my Intellectual power Out this lovely phrases, hoping to catch your eyes Then a little time apart I decided to wrote a rhythmic composition just to describe my love, my agitation to you And in exactly seven: forty six PM, My work of heart, my poetry was exactly complete Later I will send it just for you My Girl of my life, My girl of my dreams

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Date: 5/2/2014 11:01:00 AM
Hello Jhucel, You have such talent! Wonderful write:~) Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:57:00 PM
wew!!! who's that girl?!!! ... I hope she read this.. I'm sure she'll fall in love w/ a great poet like you ^_6 ..keep penning!!! :O)) keep it high!! ^_^
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/1/2014 10:34:00 PM
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:36:00 AM
The girl you're dedicating this piece to is very lucky to have you in her life. Nothing beats the feeling of receiving a heartfelt poem. This poem also feels like a short song. I can hear a melody from a guitar being strummed on a sunny day as I'm reading it. \m/
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 2:57:00 PM
Hi jake ..:O))
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 4/27/2014 8:33:00 PM
yeah.. I will try to accompany this with a guitar.. Thanks for the Idea BRO

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