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6 To 8 - Melody of Sadness

The raven’s cry bellows with twilight’s grip Echoing the staggered throb of a dirge; Where grief’s murmurings become unheard Down the walkway of crushed expectations. A strained lullaby becomes incoherent amidst wreaths As a young mother quells a song for her child, Interred through the icy pause of birds’ refrain, ebbing. Nette Onclaud Contest: 6 TO 8 25 Oct 2017

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Date: 10/31/2017 3:20:00 PM
congrats on your superb win with this deep poem so intensely crafted, rhoma... please accept my thanks for sharing this...
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Rhoma, Wow!! for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/30/2017 3:01:00 PM
- A really sad poem, Rhoma - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // S.S. :)
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Date: 10/26/2017 6:17:00 AM
Good luck in the contest on this brilliant write...Maria
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