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6 To 8--Melody of Sadness

Call me home instead and heat my soul as I roam with you, my autumn healing the curse of season's scars fulfilling my quest's return to a patient self.. It is cold and this soul needs a haven, a reflective pause from all wretched noise perhaps a soft litany of prayers.. the kind which blesses this season Oct 25, 2017 Contest: 6 To 8 by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 2/23/2024 5:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Daniel, keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 10/31/2017 3:50:00 AM
Congrats on your first place finish
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Daniel.
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Date: 10/30/2017 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on your superb win.Great write.
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Daniel, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:58:00 PM
love the use of metaphors with allusions to the theme; ' note jangling.. empty rhythm'...great last iine, daniel... kudos to you for a top spot and thanks for entering...
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Date: 10/30/2017 2:52:00 PM
- A really sad poem -Congratulations on your win, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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