.~69~. /Zodiac.Race/

~69~ /zodiac sign/

There once was a hermit crab named Nate
Who enjoyed the solitude of his hate
   Meeting a lovely lady
   A sexy Texan, name P.D.
Finding true hate, trying to online date 

(Zodiac Sign Contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:44 PM
69 who. ?????????????????????
Ammutlinra Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 2:03 AM
Congrats 2 my fave. posit.ion Encore, Tushay'' Lin~Ra
Knop Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Hey Nate! My congrats to your win with this excellent Limerick! And thanks for your kind comments!...Tc...Gert
Mannan Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Hey congratulations on your win. Thanks for your kind comments.
Culverhouse Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:29 PM
congrats on the win...you suck up!! lol
Trevino Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Super WOW! s.m =(^.^)=
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..It was a worthy write for sure..Sara
Fraser Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Many congratulations Nathan on your win in pd's contest >> James
Trevino Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Like my mom says 'YIKERS' sweet taboo =(^.^)=
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win Nathan in P. D.'S contest "Zodiac Race" Love,Carol
A  Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 7:21 PM
OH! MY I LOVE MIZZ GUZZI CoMMENT NATHAN, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN A JoB WELL DoNE, ENJoYED YoUR ENTRY 4 P.D's ZoDIAC CoNTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:18 PM
ut oh! LOL very very hard to do! Please leave a blog comment for me? Light & Love..lover boy!
Roberts Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 9:49 AM
cute one Nathan , congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:57 AM
Only yesterday I read this and today in winners' circle. Congratulations, Nathan for this superb win
K. Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:12 AM
ooh wee-- congrats on your sweet limerick, Nathan-- but hmmm what's with the last line, about finding "true hate"? sorry I had to do a double take on that one...enjoyed this one nonetheless! --nikko :)
A   Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 12:54 AM
weeeeeeeeeeeeee my love, love your sign lots, perfect for me, did you know that Cancer is the stronges zodiac sign. LOL.) I dont know why you guys have the most flaws than any of us..LOL.. just strong babe! However, Congratulations!! Thanks for a job well done, enjoyed your entry. Had fun reading,,lol,, I could have skipped the judging part, well some one had to. Glad you where among my winners,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:14 PM
An interesting entry, Nate. Congratulations for your Cancer. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 10:28 PM
Congrats Nate on your big win in P.D.'s great contest my BFF .. awesome piece and what a great title too luv.. enjoy sweet success this happy Sunday my BFF from your BFF..luv..
Mehta Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Very creative hilarious and humorous write, nathan.
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 9:16 PM
There was a dude named Nate Who really wanted P.D for an online date He was told to wait in line As he would find The Mad Poets singing her a serenade Cool poem Nathan. you have a good woman there
A   Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:33 PM
I love everything about your Limerick. But, your shell is not what makes you you..lol..I'm glad to be the essence of your existance..lol..Sadly my sweet Nate, this sign is my perfect doom match. Like your love sign you will conqure me till the end. enjoy me, love me, need me, desire me, you name it. And the latex glove is all yours..lol..;-) wink wink!,..love ya,..p.d. xoxoxooxoxox
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