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65 Wishes

mini coconut cake ~ what would a couple do with more?
snickers latte - caramel and chocolate syrup laced
mini wooden box - “LOVE YOUR GRUMPY…”
   I turn the old crank. plays: You are my sunshine…
pronouncement on paper. card’s itinerary:
   wine tasting…Sister Act musical…and dinner
   with my sisters at Tapas Bar
a gazillion, by golly, Facebook wishes
an AI poem (of course) by my Sis
opened my husband’s heart before midnight
   why should we wait…he was out of the gate
first wish on birth day day, my son in law
second wish by his wife, no, c’mon that’s too neat
   he asked her, “Do you know what today is?
   so she’s groggy and matter of factly answers,
   “Of course, my mother’s birthday…”
the double team lyrics of sis and brother in law
my dad, oh my dad, my heart… he picks up the phone
   once a year to call…how sweet he is.
texts, messages, more phone calls
husband’s precious happy birthday wake up
   two lips, two hearts of gratitude
one granddaughter, one grandson
   more to come? waiting on the eldest, youngest
   and two in-between. why am I so excited?
daughters, waiting on son - should I place them all
   before coconut cake. No particular order to this list!
a special friend, I’ve known since I was 2. He’ll be 
sixty-*$@ in a few days…falalalala..yeah, like me!
a cousin, brother oh yes brother, who’d I forget…
   perhaps you? or are you just passing through ;)

It’s like turning 21. I’m still a baby, according to the registry
of my elders. Perhaps when I’m  99, I might claim a title,
but likely the old gal that’s 101 will tap me on the shoulder.
See life gets better and better, unexpected, expecting blessings,
for you and you and you too! Hugs and Kisses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 6:59 AM
Let me wish you a belated birthday Kim. This is indeed a fun write. I must say that you are lucky to have recieved such a huge heap of wishes, gifts and also beautiful gestures from your loved ones on your special day. Rejoice!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 7:46 PM
Feel very blessed and from all my PS friends too. Thank you, Valsa!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Feel very blessed and from all my PS friends too. Thank you, Valsa!
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Belated Happy Birthday, Kim. Loved the poem!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Charles!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 1:14 AM
Many happy returns for your birthday. Great fare to celebrate.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Victor,
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 8:31 PM
Wow. Such a fun write. So it's your birthday . Libra is a great horoscope sign
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Hind Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:05 PM
Wow. I am glad I was checking in tonight. Happy birthday, dear Kim!!! Love how your list poem went from one saga to the next, it's VERY cool. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Paige! I enjoyed writing it!
DiMino Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 1:14 PM
The first hundred years are the roughest. Have a glorious birthday my friend! Blessings!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 6:20 PM
LOL!
Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 6:58 AM
Great write! Happy birthday!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 10:20 AM
Thank you! :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Oh!! Kim we were designed by God to be eternal, but mankind messed up and missed the mark, so we are on this earth only a certain amount of time. If you come from long livers, you might make it to way over a hundred but only God knows. I hope you have quite a few more years ahead of you. I turned 80 this year. I never thought I would make it this long. My biological father was only 64 and one brother made it to be about the same then the other three only to 54 or 55. I say Happy Birthday Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Thank you, Sara! Hugs
Rolland Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 6:33 PM
so nice poetry, i love the links between food and cherishes ones, wish happy birthday to all your friends, getting old bring wisdom, i guess
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 7:54 PM
Perhaps! Now I’m 65, but still a baby to many…too funny!
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