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sixty-fourth birthday one candle on the cake my wife's gift the Sergeant Pepper album *will you still love me when. . ."

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Date: 12/30/2015 12:17:00 PM
Awe Tomas, such a tender question... ... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/30/2015 11:44:00 AM
right on the dot.. love is eternal, far longer than 64!.. greeat one, thomas..huggs
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:10:00 AM
:-))) I like the beat of that Beatles song too. Your tanka complements it nicely. Thanks for your visits to my page, Thomas. Sorry for delayed visit... here today to catch up. Again, have a great year ahead!
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Date: 12/28/2015 12:56:00 PM
I'm 644444444444444444 - love that track:-) great tanka Thomas:-) hugs Jan xx
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