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sixty-fourth birthday
one candle on the cake
my wife's gift
the Sergeant Pepper album
*will you still love me when. . ."

birthdaysongtanka

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Poet Destroyer A

December 30, 2015 at 12:17 PM

Awe Tomas, such a tender question... ... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~

Nette Onclaud

December 30, 2015 at 11:44 AM

right on the dot.. love is eternal, far longer than 64!.. greeat one, thomas..huggs

Kp Nunez

December 30, 2015 at 4:10 AM

:-))) I like the beat of that Beatles song too. Your tanka complements it nicely. Thanks for your visits to my page, Thomas. Sorry for delayed visit... here today to catch up. Again, have a great year ahead!