John Lawless Poet Limerick

60 Inch Wide Screen Limerick

he used his piton and his wedge
seated them with the thump of his sledge
then he stood at the crest
of her milky white breasts
looking down from atop the cleave-edge


John G. Lawless
2/27/2015

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Maurice Rigoler March 3, 2015 at 8:35 PM This is very clever. As for "hanged" and "hung" both are acceptable, though I dare say most men would prefer to be "hung" rather than "hanged." Thanks for the stop by. / M

Jan Allison February 27, 2015 at 6:08 PM ha ha ha you could have made a boob - but this is such a clever play on words - love it:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx