5g-Ennials

A kitten with a ball of yarn Young calf nursing in a barn A puppy with a brand-new bone ~ Infant with a new smart-phone

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/4/2019 9:17:00 AM

Fantastic title! And a wow!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/4/2019 2:19:00 PM

I was hoping someone would like this title. Appreciate your support here, Kim! ;) gw

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 9/3/2019 1:13:00 PM

The last line floored me too Sir. Quite exquisite. Excellent Gershon...Ron

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2019 4:54:00 PM

Glad to hear it, Ron. Now it's time to get up off of the floor. LOL. Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 9/3/2019 7:35:00 AM

That last line really made me laugh. Nicely done my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2019 4:54:00 PM

Alright. Then it did its job. Thanks for letting me know, Chris. Best wishes, gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/2/2019 10:00:00 PM

Striking, Gershon. Love how your poem packs a punch.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2019 4:52:00 PM

Alright! Hope it was a 'Hawaiian Punch,' as they used to say. LOL. Thanks, Line. ~ gw