5 W's

Who will help me in times of troubles?
What am I going to do about it?
When this pain will subside?
Where can I go if things go wrong?
Why is life such a battle?

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Date: 9/15/2012 8:17:00 PM
All good questions that don't always have answers. There should be a star for each "W" you have here.
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Date: 9/2/2012 11:57:00 AM
Questions from the heart from someone who's been put through the wringer. Hugs
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:31:00 PM
"Why is life such a battle?" an age old question... so far no one has come up with a good answer! Oh well... big hugs and much love, Jack
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Date: 8/28/2012 8:45:00 AM
very nice ,i do feel the way also but can never find the answer so i stop asking
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Date: 8/27/2012 8:43:00 PM
so sorry you forgot to enter this one, sweetie!! I have done that several times in other contests. You just want to kick yourself!!!
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Date: 8/27/2012 10:00:00 AM
hi, mary! you missed the contest because of forgetfulness my friend. i remember your awesome poem, Forgetfulness. Thanks for dropping by and reading my poem. God bless you my friend.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/27/2012 10:27:00 AM
yeah (^_^) its ok friend Nore...thanks a lot
Date: 8/27/2012 9:48:00 AM
A poem that cries for help ... Hope it's not true .... Hope you are smiling and happy so that your photo is. A good poem Maria. oxox big hug to you / / Anne-Lise :)
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/27/2012 9:58:00 AM
that was before friend Anne..I already survived..thanks God!! thanks for stopping by...this poem suppose to be in harry's contest 5 W's but I forget to enter...its ok...have a nice day!!
Date: 8/26/2012 8:56:00 PM
wow....wow!!!!! another excellent and wonderful composition my dear friend, Mary! I love it! Good luck in the contest.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 11:31:00 PM
always thank for my friend Nore...Love you friend :)
Date: 8/26/2012 6:47:00 PM
Maria, good luck in the contest..pd
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 11:30:00 PM
thanks friend PD for your support :) Have a nice day!!
Date: 8/26/2012 5:15:00 PM
very nice write very relateable thank you
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 11:29:00 PM
thanks friend Bradley :)
Date: 8/26/2012 12:17:00 PM
lovely write - many congrats on your wins : )
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 11:28:00 PM
thanks jack :) Have a nice day!!
Date: 8/26/2012 11:19:00 AM
Nice one, Maria. Soupmail for ya.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 11:38:00 AM
Thanks a lot friend Andrea...I already read your mail (^_^) Have a nice day!!
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