5 W's

Who will help me in times of troubles? What am I going to do about it? When this pain will subside? Where can I go if things go wrong? Why is life such a battle?

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Robert Pettit

Date: 9/15/2012 8:17:00 PM

All good questions that don't always have answers. There should be a star for each "W" you have here.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/2/2012 11:57:00 AM

Questions from the heart from someone who's been put through the wringer. Hugs

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/30/2012 6:31:00 PM

"Why is life such a battle?" an age old question... so far no one has come up with a good answer! Oh well... big hugs and much love, Jack

Kasim Ishmael

Date: 8/28/2012 8:45:00 AM

very nice ,i do feel the way also but can never find the answer so i stop asking

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2012 8:43:00 PM

so sorry you forgot to enter this one, sweetie!! I have done that several times in other contests. You just want to kick yourself!!!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/27/2012 10:00:00 AM

hi, mary! you missed the contest because of forgetfulness my friend. i remember your awesome poem, Forgetfulness. Thanks for dropping by and reading my poem. God bless you my friend.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/27/2012 10:27:00 AM

yeah (^_^) its ok friend Nore...thanks a lot

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2012 9:48:00 AM

A poem that cries for help ... Hope it's not true .... Hope you are smiling and happy so that your photo is. A good poem Maria. oxox big hug to you / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/27/2012 9:58:00 AM

that was before friend Anne..I already survived..thanks God!! thanks for stopping by...this poem suppose to be in harry's contest 5 W's but I forget to enter...its ok...have a nice day!!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/26/2012 8:56:00 PM

wow....wow!!!!! another excellent and wonderful composition my dear friend, Mary! I love it! Good luck in the contest.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/26/2012 11:31:00 PM

always thank for my friend Nore...Love you friend :)