5 W's

Who will help me in times of troubles?
What am I going to do about it?
When this pain will subside?
Where can I go if things go wrong?
Why is life such a battle?
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Pettit Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 8:17 PM
All good questions that don't always have answers. There should be a star for each "W" you have here.
Macfarlane Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Questions from the heart from someone who's been put through the wringer. Hugs
Ellison Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 6:31 PM
"Why is life such a battle?" an age old question... so far no one has come up with a good answer! Oh well... big hugs and much love, Jack
Ishmael Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 8:45 AM
very nice ,i do feel the way also but can never find the answer so i stop asking
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 8:43 PM
so sorry you forgot to enter this one, sweetie!! I have done that several times in other contests. You just want to kick yourself!!!
Gasun Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 10:00 AM
hi, mary! you missed the contest because of forgetfulness my friend. i remember your awesome poem, Forgetfulness. Thanks for dropping by and reading my poem. God bless you my friend.
Liwayway Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 10:27 AM
yeah (^_^) its ok friend Nore...thanks a lot
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 9:48 AM
A poem that cries for help ... Hope it's not true .... Hope you are smiling and happy so that your photo is. A good poem Maria. oxox big hug to you / / Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 9:58 AM
that was before friend Anne..I already survived..thanks God!! thanks for stopping by...this poem suppose to be in harry's contest 5 W's but I forget to enter...its ok...have a nice day!!
Gasun Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 8:56 PM
wow....wow!!!!! another excellent and wonderful composition my dear friend, Mary! I love it! Good luck in the contest.
Liwayway Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:31 PM
always thank for my friend Nore...Love you friend :)
A   Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Maria, good luck in the contest..pd
Liwayway Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:30 PM
thanks friend PD for your support :) Have a nice day!!
Cox Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 5:15 PM
very nice write very relateable thank you
Liwayway Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:29 PM
thanks friend Bradley :)
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 12:17 PM
lovely write - many congrats on your wins : )
Liwayway Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:28 PM
thanks jack :) Have a nice day!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Nice one, Maria. Soupmail for ya.
Liwayway Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Thanks a lot friend Andrea...I already read your mail (^_^) Have a nice day!!
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