5, Pentameter



"5, Pentameter"

Where goest thou scribe?
you write and write and write
but nothing right 

black lines 
words artisan 
like charcoal

who sees the marks 
pentameter scorched 
smoking invisible 

in that place

just so
branded above
the breastplate

the wrist pauses 
the sword held aloft
the thought hovers

waiting to be 
cut 
in half

and dropped
but 5 too shallow
and the grave, 

too deep

the eyes 
en garde
the mind 

like a stitch
in time
cast off

shuffles 
soft shoe
off 

this mortal coil
tiger balm 
lit 

with 
mosquitoes
to sleep

separated
captured
eventually


(LadyLabyrinth/2023) 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Labyrinth Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:05 PM
This song with this poem.
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November 18, 2023 at 1:48 PM
:)
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November 18, 2023 at 12:13 PM
https://youtu.be/ZKIWYddocpA?si=i7xgL35fBN607u7t
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November 18, 2023 at 12:05 PM
https://genius.com/Patti-smith-group-dancing-barefoot-lyrics
Poetry Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 10:08 AM
In the heat of night the mosquito barely makes a sound but we know it is there by the lasting remembrance of its loving bite
Labyrinth Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Australian Mosquitoes sound like a squadron of marauding bombers...
Labyrinth Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Mortein and a retained sense of humour helps.Xx.
Moore Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 7:33 AM
"Ring the bells that still can ring Forget your perfect offering There is a crack, a crack in everything That's how the light gets in" - Leonard Cohen (Anthem)
Labyrinth Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:52 PM
"First, we take Manhattan, then we take Berlin". Leonard Cohen
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November 18, 2023 at 12:03 PM
https://genius.com/Leonard-cohen-first-we-take-manhattan-lyrics
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November 17, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Another very creative write/pictures. It was fun to read. "Love" your added quotes in your comment boxes. Much to think about. Hope you are OK. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Clearly, like many poets/writers past and present...and in these good pages, the labyrinthine halls of PS, I am embracing the ever-blooming existential crisis. It would appear that I am in stellar company and not alone. Regards, What Fresh Hell Is This...
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:04 AM
"A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds." Percy Bysshe Shelley
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:04 AM
"Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash." Leonard Cohen
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:04 AM
"What is a poet? An unhappy person who conceals profound anguish in his heart but whose lips are so formed that as sighs and cries pass over them they sound like beautiful music." Soren Kierkegaard
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:04 AM
"The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth." Jean Cocteau .... hmmm
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM
"What fresh hell is this?" Dorothy Parker
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:13 AM
I concur.
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM
"Poetry is the deification of reality." Edith Sitwell - :)
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM
"God is the perfect poet." Robert Browning
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM
"A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep." Salman Rushdie...yup
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM
"A poet looks at the world the way a man looks at a woman." Wallace Stevens...well, not entirely p.c. but I hear you brother.
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November 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM
"Poetry is the art of creating imaginary gardens with real toads." Marianne Moore
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November 17, 2023 at 9:13 AM
here, here sister...never a truer word spoken.
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:03 AM
"No poems can please for long or live that are written by water drinkers." Horace ....double hmmmmmmm (19 Crimes, Hard Chard)
Moore Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Once again, inspiring as usual; jolting and soothing by turns... "the wrist pauses the sword held aloft the thought hovers waiting to be cut in half" (Ah, the essence of a good poem - cut and cut again!) Thank you for this moment, to sit in that sunlit chair, in a meadow filled room.
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:51 AM
I had a moment. Amongst several.
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November 17, 2023 at 8:25 AM
"Entangled"/Original. (Eraldo Bernocchi, Harold Budd, Robin Guthrie)
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November 17, 2023 at 8:25 AM
https://youtu.be/-H7QrVKEX64?si=jEH4rXqwjgXeyyxj
Labyrinth Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:07 AM
"Entangled", fast (Eraldo Bernocchi cover)/Peter Noah Deleon
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November 17, 2023 at 8:07 AM
https://youtu.be/DC3ZotbqqFs?si=MNjGBuMlTQDoJ8xu
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