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5 For the Journey

have I the right to think all things are products of conditions past or present in which direction does the real self lie how much of what we create will be our descendants' must-haves ever seeking meaning and purpose will it be worth the price change will make us we will produce change which will be the most true

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William Darnell Sr.

Date: 7/2/2023 7:57:00 PM

Hey, Ripple! I loved reading your well-versed poetry. These lines drew me in, in the fourth stanza, or verse; "ever seeking meaning and purpose will it be worth the price?" Thought-provoking, to say the least. Excellently penned! In my favs, plus, thank you for sharing. Best Wishes, William

Michelle Morris

Date: 7/2/2023 8:24:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your thought-provoking poem. Take care and stay safe. :-)

Joanna Feltham

Date: 7/2/2023 8:03:00 AM

It's strange that I read your poem today. I've been thinking about this a lot lately. They say Nature and Nurture plays a key role. Thank you for sharing. Nicely penned.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/2/2021 7:43:00 AM

Yes, change is an assured thing even if it is very small and hardly noticeable. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara