51st street

i saw a lighter on the ground
i saw a kid throw his happy meal out of the window of a car
i saw a stray cat rotting next to his missing poster
all of his stray friends trying to guard the body from rats

every killer, every sinner of every kind
i find them here
on this street

i saw a squirrel on the ground
ran down on the road, buried in dust
I saw trash on the ground
filling up the storm drains, we can't keep up with the flood 

every killer, every sinner of every kind
i find them here
on this street

any living thing with a bit of hope inside
is 99 miles away
from this street

i saw a girl, held against the wall
she was being arrested by the cops
a fallen angel, but nowhere near as saintly
someone I knew, but who cares, really?
i saw them throw her in the back 
i watched them drive away in the opposite direction of my home

every killer, every sinner of every kind
I found them here 
on this street

any living thing with a bit of hope inside
is on the opposite side of the world
from this street

the difference is like night and day
like home and away
it's different here, from where i stand
and that's how i know

i'm not on this street
and i'm never coming back

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Date: 8/11/2024 6:31:00 PM
Your story brings back memories of my childhood neighborhood. Although I never saw anyone tossing away Happy Meals, 51st Street often felt like an unexpected detour in life that we sometimes take without realizing.
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Date: 8/11/2024 1:26:00 PM
I love the story you conveyed. It gave a vivid look of a hell from a different perspective. Its dark and out of life. There is no sunshine and deception is everywhere. Thank you!
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Date: 8/11/2024 8:34:00 AM
Ramael, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. This was a deeply moving and meaningful poem. I look forward to reading more. You, sir, are keeping it real.
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Date: 8/12/2024 9:57:00 PM
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