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50 Shades of Naked

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If you are 50 and you are naked Please Make it a poem and not a photo A poem we see your inner beauty A photo we see out of warranty A poem we see you’re giving spirit A photo we see your sagging dreams A wilting flower is majestical poetry On paper is part of a suicide note A naked mind will melt hearts young and old A naked old man will scare away the scare crows No one wants to see grandma naked Not even poor old grandpa But we will love her all the more For chocolate chip cookies and loving hugs You however my princess At fifty x three, lovely and naked just for me And I will love you to the very bone

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/23/2015 6:46:00 PM

Yeah I just love this one, no explanations! A Fav.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/11/2015 10:16:00 AM

I kinda thought you might like this one! Cheers

Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2015 7:38:00 AM

This is the nakedness of outer and inner beauty; very clever; enjoy your twists, as always, Arthur. // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/11/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Paul !!

Billy Jones

Date: 3/15/2015 8:46:00 PM

this peom rocks, keep up this wonderful work :-)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:40:00 PM

Thanks Billy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/15/2015 3:35:00 PM

Ha ha, you strike again Arthur!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Richard!!!!!!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/15/2015 3:16:00 PM

ha! very clever...been milking the fifty shades lately, eh? haha...and what's with fifty three? as usual, love your sharp wit!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:39:00 PM

Oh I have many 50 shades in the works!!!!!! I am just getting warmed up!!!!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/15/2015 7:17:00 AM

Nice save with the last few lines. Love where you're coming from with the whole piece.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:37:00 PM

Thanks Scot, yes without those last three lines I was gonna get crucified here!!!!!!! Cheers!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2015 6:18:00 AM

pull em in with the title Arthur - you sure did with this one - love your humour my friend 7 - love the final lines - wrinkles and all you will love her .. unless shes had plastic surgery lolxx :-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:36:00 PM

Thanks Jan, you have me figured out!!!! LOL

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/15/2015 4:57:00 AM

Wow!! Can I hold the pen you are holding? Men, you are good. In love!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:35:00 PM

You are just being way to kind njeri!!!!! hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/15/2015 4:19:00 AM

You knew you'd get me with the title, didn't ya! This is Eileen....I was going to tell you off till I read those last three lines. Lovely, Arthur. Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:35:00 PM

Well thank you, and you know me, this poem, was about both topics, inner beauty, and the fact we age, and how unpleasant that can feel inside for us all!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 2:25:00 AM

Dear Arthur, There is too much attention payed to outer beauty, a fleeting attribute. Although I laughed at the "out of warranty" line, I was quite impressed with the last three lines. No matter how old we get, those we love most always look beautiful to us. Witty and charming! Love, carolyn

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/15/2015 10:34:00 PM

Thank you, I that was the message I was trying to convey!!