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50 Shades of Naked

If you are 50 and you are naked
Please
Make it a poem and not a photo
A poem we see your inner beauty
A photo we see out of warranty
A poem we see you’re giving spirit
A photo we see your sagging dreams
A wilting flower is majestical poetry
On paper is part of a suicide note
A naked mind will melt hearts young and old
A naked old man will scare away the scare crows
No one wants to see grandma naked
Not even poor old grandpa
But we will love her all the more
For chocolate chip cookies and loving hugs

You however my princess
At fifty x three, lovely and naked just for me
And I will love you to the very bone

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Maurice Yvonne Date: 3/23/2015 6:46:00 PM Yeah I just love this one, no explanations! A Fav. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 4/11/2015 10:16:00 AM I kinda thought you might like this one! Cheers

Paul Callus Date: 3/16/2015 7:38:00 AM This is the nakedness of outer and inner beauty; very clever; enjoy your twists, as always, Arthur. // paul Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 4/11/2015 10:16:00 AM Thank you Paul !!

Billy Jones Date: 3/15/2015 8:46:00 PM this peom rocks, keep up this wonderful work :-) Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:40:00 PM Thanks Billy

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/15/2015 3:35:00 PM Ha ha, you strike again Arthur! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:39:00 PM Thank you Richard!!!!!!

Kp Nunez Date: 3/15/2015 3:16:00 PM ha! very clever...been milking the fifty shades lately, eh? haha...and what's with fifty three? as usual, love your sharp wit! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:39:00 PM Oh I have many 50 shades in the works!!!!!! I am just getting warmed up!!!!

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 3/15/2015 7:17:00 AM Nice save with the last few lines. Love where you're coming from with the whole piece. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:37:00 PM Thanks Scot, yes without those last three lines I was gonna get crucified here!!!!!!! Cheers!

Jan Allison Date: 3/15/2015 6:18:00 AM pull em in with the title Arthur - you sure did with this one - love your humour my friend 7 - love the final lines - wrinkles and all you will love her .. unless shes had plastic surgery lolxx :-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:36:00 PM Thanks Jan, you have me figured out!!!! LOL

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 3/15/2015 4:57:00 AM Wow!! Can I hold the pen you are holding? Men, you are good. In love! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:35:00 PM You are just being way to kind njeri!!!!! hugs

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/15/2015 4:19:00 AM You knew you'd get me with the title, didn't ya! This is Eileen....I was going to tell you off till I read those last three lines. Lovely, Arthur. Hugs Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:35:00 PM Well thank you, and you know me, this poem, was about both topics, inner beauty, and the fact we age, and how unpleasant that can feel inside for us all!

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/15/2015 2:25:00 AM Dear Arthur, There is too much attention payed to outer beauty, a fleeting attribute. Although I laughed at the "out of warranty" line, I was quite impressed with the last three lines. No matter how old we get, those we love most always look beautiful to us. Witty and charming! Love, carolyn Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 3/15/2015 10:34:00 PM Thank you, I that was the message I was trying to convey!!