4th of July Night

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Inspired By: Andrea Dietrich Written on 7/7/2023

Dusk they flock and see sparks light up brilliant colorful fireworks in darkest dark ; red, white, and blue as our star and strips waves in the chill air arousing, flickering a blaze of excitement, patriotic American spirit.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2023 1:29:00 PM

Good work about this time of year. Way to go with this winner. Congratulations. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/28/2023 6:03:00 PM

Very patriotic, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/28/2023 5:41:00 PM

Dear Eve, I enjoyed the celebratory spirit and lively imagery of your July etheree. Congratulations for your success in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/8/2023 2:05:00 AM

You have a lot of fireworks on your feast day. But we outdo you, we have fireworks every weekend. Each parish would not be a feast without fireworks. I prefer them to go to church. A fine poem. Best for a win. Hugs xx

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/7/2023 5:11:00 PM

Your thoughts are beautiful, emotional, and tender, all at the same time. I have chills while reading this. I'm holding your words so close to my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, Eve. Hugs, Brandy

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/7/2023 12:58:00 PM

Yes, the Fourth is very dazzling with fireworks and patriotic colors, hopes this does well for you~