4th of July Musings

4th of July Musings

Freedom – a gift given to our land,
By those to whom it was denied;
Then earned and earned and earned again
By countless brave our flag to fly.

Is this treasure threatened on this 4th?
Are we losing Independence this day?
Wars and hate dot the planet, must we fear
It will all be taken away?

For are we free if we must point guns
At those who point theirs at us?
Are we free if we can’t say or be
Ourselves without causing a fuss? 

Or should we begin again at church and home
To set  examples of kindness and love,
That like a rock in the center of a pool
Will spread rings of peace from above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Breidenthal Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 1:54 AM
Extraordinary poem! Marvelous words here and very nicely written lines. -JWE
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Love that last stanza, Sunlite. It's the personification of true freedom! :) gw
Casto Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 4:22 PM
May we be forever free. Happy Independence in its real sense! Grand poem!
Blown Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 2:18 PM
there are certain public holidays MEANT FOR THE PEOPLE...not for some grand standing con man
Sands Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 11:14 AM
Lovely poem Sunlite. Perfect last stanza too and I like the rock spreading the rings of peace :)
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