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4th of July Carnival

Carnival 4th of July Rides so fun, they make you cry. Children screaming in high pitch. Barker yelling, looks like a witch. Vendor games you have to try. Please come back, 4th of July. Fair magic, I have the itch. Can’t win games, due to the pitch.

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Arturo Michael

Date: 4/26/2019 7:24:00 PM

It's coming...Fun and games...It's a time to celebrate...

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/27/2019 2:30:00 AM

This was my father's favorite holiday; we had a carnival every year with rides for the kids on the 4th of July. He is in heaven enjoying it now with all of his cronies who passed first.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/26/2019 5:29:00 PM

It's com'in up! Although, you are a bit early...obviously, you are needing some fun.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/27/2019 2:30:00 AM

OBVIOUSLY I am the fun, right M.L.?

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/26/2019 10:55:00 AM

Howdy,Caren A lovely mind's eye peek into the 4th! Really enjoyed this one. Panagiota, the Firecracker :-)))

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/27/2019 2:30:00 AM

thank you Firecracker woman!