Caren Krutsinger Poet Jueju

4th of July Carnival

Carnival 4th of July
Rides so fun, they make you cry.
Children screaming in high pitch.
Barker yelling, looks like a witch.

Vendor games you have to try.
Please come back, 4th of July.
Fair magic, I have the itch.
Can’t win games, due to the pitch.

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Arturo Michael April 26, 2019 at 7:24 PM It's coming...Fun and games...It's a time to celebrate... Caren Krutsinger April 27, 2019 at 2:30 AM This was my father's favorite holiday; we had a carnival every year with rides for the kids on the 4th of July. He is in heaven enjoying it now with all of his cronies who passed first.

M. L. Kiser April 26, 2019 at 5:29 PM It's com'in up! Although, you are a bit early...obviously, you are needing some fun. Caren Krutsinger April 27, 2019 at 2:30 AM OBVIOUSLY I am the fun, right M.L.?

Panagiota Romios April 26, 2019 at 10:55 AM Howdy,Caren A lovely mind's eye peek into the 4th! Really enjoyed this one. Panagiota, the Firecracker :-))) Caren Krutsinger April 27, 2019 at 2:30 AM thank you Firecracker woman!