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She made this, I guess she is proud.

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She doesn't say "I love you" 
She says " I am proud of you''
My Granddaughter sprinkles tinsel,
all around the dullest of days.

pridefree verse

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Laurentine G

May 15, 2026 at 12:26 AM

Haha! Just saw your reply to Paula :D I hope you are back in your art studio again <3 I did a bit of painting recently - mine looks very high school angsty with imagery radiating out from an eye, but I enjoyed making it (exactly what I used to draw when at school, so just picking up where I left of!). If I go back to the painting, I'm planning to add mixed media and see how wild I can make it :) think of you often x

Laurentine G

May 15, 2026 at 9:54 AM

Speaks Volumes

May 15, 2026 at 9:44 AM

You: :) think of you often x Me: Ditto : )

I Am Anaya

May 13, 2026 at 6:58 PM

Beautiful, Wendy, you are so beautiful. Looks like a great time, busy bee. Stay cool~

Speaks Volumes

May 15, 2026 at 9:45 AM

Ta : )

Paula Goldsmith

May 13, 2026 at 11:05 AM

What a wonderful write you have here in just "4 lines." Love This... Fun Picture... How old is she??? Did you know they have tinsel for the hair. Get the clip in, Not tie in. Have a lovely day writing away............

Speaks Volumes

May 13, 2026 at 12:38 PM

Thank you sweet Paula. She is 31 ! Believe me, if I had known Grandchildren could be so wonderful, I would have had them first.

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