4 Jon On Our 22nd Wedding Anniversary

Your love is
quite sensational –

Your laughter tastes
    like spring-time rain

Your tears smell
    like sweet lemon flower petals

Your voice looks
    so 
    deeply 
    majestic

Your heart sounds
    like exquisite violin and harp concertos

And your eyes!

Your eyes feel
    like early autumn sunset’s amber-gold lengthening glow

Oh, my love, your love
is entirely, completely,
embracingly

Sen-sational!

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 9/28/2012 9:11:00 AM

arly autumn sunset's amber-gold lengthening glow....Simply wow + a not so boring way to introduce some grammar lessons for lazy students as I used to be; just remember one once for a lifetime strikingly good example and forget about the grammar rules to be learned by heart ! Thanks a lot !:) - Hanitra