Iolanda Scripca Poet Kimo

45 Years of Marriage

A canopy of future dreams awaits
Two mothers and two fathers
Pray for veiled bride and groom 

A Jewish wedding in a Kimo style
Breaking the glass - tradition -
...Immorality - STOP !!!



For Dr Ram's Contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage"
Kimo - was invented in Israel.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 8:21 AM Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Iolanda. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 26, 2011 at 2:55 PM My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Iolanda

Elaine George June 24, 2011 at 8:05 AM Beautiful Kimo, Iolanda. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2011 at 7:28 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2011 at 9:51 PM A most interesting and cultural one here, Iolanda! And by all means, join us in the Phillipines!!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 6:18 AM Congratulations on your win Iolanda in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 4, 2011 at 2:59 AM great way to go, iolanda.. congrats to you! :) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 3, 2011 at 7:34 PM You sure gave this a twist at the end, Iolanda! Very interesting take on the challenge :) Congrats on your win :)

John Freeman April 3, 2011 at 4:46 PM A good looking verse there in the top ten Iolanda. Congratulations on your worthy poem's seventh place honor. Quite good, a touching verse lady. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta April 3, 2011 at 3:20 PM Congratulations on the seventh place win in my contest, Iolanda

Sara Kendrick March 28, 2011 at 12:25 PM Yes, great to have two mothers and two fathers praying for the couple..Enjoyed reading today..This reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara

Nette Onclaud March 27, 2011 at 1:24 PM a suprising twist at the end, iolanda...a gripping piece ! winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Elaine George March 27, 2011 at 4:22 AM Absolutely beautiful! Iolanda. Elaine

Carrie Richards March 21, 2011 at 3:57 PM This ends with shatter!! Love it, Iolanda!! ps...I do hope things are going well?

Constance La France March 21, 2011 at 4:17 AM I love the line "a canopy of future dreams await" best of luck in the contest~~

Dr.Ram Mehta March 21, 2011 at 4:11 AM Thanks for the entry, Iolanda