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45 Years of Marriage

A canopy of future dreams awaits Two mothers and two fathers Pray for veiled bride and groom A Jewish wedding in a Kimo style Breaking the glass - tradition - ...Immorality - STOP !!! For Dr Ram's Contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" Kimo - was invented in Israel.

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Date: 8/4/2011 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 2:55:00 PM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Iolanda
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful Kimo, Iolanda. Lainie
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:51:00 PM
A most interesting and cultural one here, Iolanda! And by all means, join us in the Phillipines!!
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Iolanda in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 2:59:00 AM
great way to go, iolanda.. congrats to you! :) huggs
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Date: 4/3/2011 7:34:00 PM
You sure gave this a twist at the end, Iolanda! Very interesting take on the challenge :) Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 4:46:00 PM
A good looking verse there in the top ten Iolanda. Congratulations on your worthy poem's seventh place honor. Quite good, a touching verse lady. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/3/2011 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in my contest, Iolanda
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Date: 3/28/2011 12:25:00 PM
Yes, great to have two mothers and two fathers praying for the couple..Enjoyed reading today..This reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:24:00 PM
a suprising twist at the end, iolanda...a gripping piece ! winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/27/2011 4:22:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Iolanda. Elaine
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Date: 3/21/2011 3:57:00 PM
This ends with shatter!! Love it, Iolanda!! ps...I do hope things are going well?
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:17:00 AM
I love the line "a canopy of future dreams await" best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:11:00 AM
Thanks for the entry, Iolanda
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