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3 Tankas On Honey

Like a Hungry Bear
I approach the Honey Jar
Slurping the Sweetness
Pearls of sticky glue dripping
Fast I Lick my lustful lips


Now the jar's empty
I Scoop the Delicious Dew
My restless fingers 
Rushing to work honestly
Leaving not a drop to wipe


My taste buds do speak
Savor the lingering last
Reaching the zenith
Grateful to  flowers and bees
My blissful heart blesses them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/25/2013 5:33:00 AM
WOW! I really like this! I'm hopeless with Tankas, but you seem to have gotten it right. I'm not an expert. Harry Horseman is! Hope he reads this!
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Sima Mittal
Date: 4/25/2013 8:16:00 AM
thanks Eileen! I've also enjoyed a lot of your fun poems.....
Date: 4/25/2013 2:33:00 AM
My first shot at TANKAS.....hopefully got them right.....
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