3 Monokus of Autumn

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bare autumn trees frowned - all their colorful leaves lay on the ground autumn holds them at bay – cold winter winds want to come out to play seasonal work suited autumn to a tee - rest of year fancy free

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/8/2023 11:20:00 AM

I love the trees frowned line especially! So beautiful! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/8/2023 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Empress

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/7/2023 11:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement x

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/7/2023 11:52:00 PM

Thanks D

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/27/2023 10:36:00 AM

Delightful personification, SV! I do love the whimsical last line. You so artfully express the impending changes as beautifully colored leaves fall - their mission accomplished - and winter waits in the wings to fulfill its mission! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/7/2023 11:53:00 PM

Thanks Sam

Jay Narain

Date: 10/27/2023 10:04:00 AM

Nice ones

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/7/2023 11:53:00 PM

Thanks Jay

Karen Jones

Date: 10/27/2023 3:37:00 AM

Whimsical and fun.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/7/2023 11:52:00 PM

Thanks Karen