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3 Monokus of Autumn

bare autumn trees frowned - all their colorful leaves lay on the ground

autumn holds them at bay – cold winter winds want to come out to play

seasonal work suited autumn to a tee - rest of year fancy free
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Empress Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:20 AM
I love the trees frowned line especially! So beautiful! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved
Volumes Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Thank you Empress
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Monoku write. Enjoy your day/win writing away........
Volumes Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Thank you Paula
Kauffman Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Delightful personification, SV! I do love the whimsical last line. You so artfully express the impending changes as beautifully colored leaves fall - their mission accomplished - and winter waits in the wings to fulfill its mission! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.
Volumes Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 11:53 PM
Thanks Sam
Narain Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Nice ones
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November 7, 2023 at 11:53 PM
Thanks Jay
Jones Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Whimsical and fun.
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November 7, 2023 at 11:52 PM
Thanks Karen
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