3 minute write

Shades of a nursery rhyme? Your Tanka is powerful.

Dear David, impressive how youv written a tanka in three minutes. I did a simple letter to my son. Was fun. Yours is deep and has a very powerful meaning between your well woven words and lines flowing seamlessly. I love especially the last line which can be interpreted in so many ways. “ that porridge was warm ~ but sh!te” sometimes, what seems warm and nice may not always be good. Brilliant! Best wishes for the contest. Pleasure reading this today. Sending you light

What a fun write you have here. In just 3 minutes one can make porridge as they write away. I like nuts in mine. I enjoyed reading this fun one. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed/fun day writing away........

Reheated porridge, yuck, I'll pass, give me a full irish any day lol. Tom

LOL! In the end her break in, thievery, and destruction of private property… it was all … If she is held accountable she might turn out alright…lol. Love this!

Listen here, Mush… I do the brilliant last line (or so I’m told), Alright? ;-) I suppose I’d better google réchauffés in order to educate myself. Regardless,, thoroughly enjoyed the write and had a good giggle at that last line. All the best in the contest, David. Terry

Goldilocks shoulda been outta there before three minutes and LONG before she fell asleep in the comfy bed. A belly full of porridge was tempting the hands of fate, much less the roving hands of three minutes on any clock. I think my commenting time is about 3 minutes, so I'm outta here. Hope the door is still open. You give pause to think, David but I've left before my time's up.