3 Love Poems: a Gift, Now I Know, Why You

A GIFT You've given me a piece of your soul inside a sunken brown envelope written handle with care as if I was born heavy-handed. You've telescoped my soul once more in its caravan on a mountain slope stooped by a bulky backpack. It's good you've frozen that portion of my long journey I could have missed the sun just because I stooped too low that I could only see my heavy footsteps. I've always known when I unwrap your love with my crystal-pure letter opener I've trapped a powerful force that allows me to forge ahead with its timely smiles. what I just received is static showcase of a dynamic love! NOW I KNOW Now I know you covered yourself in coming to me for I was too green to know myself that outgrows my form. I am sorry if I hated anything that didn't speak my unfulfilled language though what it attempted was to enrich it and my world. You spoke my language nonetheless and maneuvered me into marching to my inner heart. How could I resist from following strangely familiar footprints to a wide lawn home almost forgotten in the dark smoke of my activities. WHY YOU Could it be That my footprints Have lead me To meet and see you as beautiful? I could have seen you any other else If these noise would have stopped crowding about my sensitive ear. Maybe I was formed To see you as I do And there's no way To be otherwise. Or if there is It could be a slim probability I could not wait For time to unwrap Your true worth For I have my heart Filled with pregnant rose And to wait a little longer Would mean forever. It could be that you are an eclectic of personalities that lighted my footprints or, perhaps, watered them with tears. in my case I chose you and that's a footprint hard to erase!
Dalila Agtani
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 3, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest x 2. Wishing you the best Dalila. Love, Carol
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May 29, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Wow, for your first post here on the soup... very strong... you have 3 good reason for a gift of strength.. take care... p.d.
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May 15, 2011 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations on your "featured" poem this week~~
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May 13, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Dalia.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations Dalila on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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May 9, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Dalila
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May 8, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Congrats Dalia on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all with luv..
Mehta Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:02 PM
You have a nice flair of writing the verses, quite impressive and creative, Dalila
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April 19, 2011 at 4:16 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dalila. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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