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3 By 8 Image

Sister World

Oh sister world that can’t be seen
You dwell beside our haunting moon.
Are you like Earth, are your fields green?

by Connie Marcum Wong

3 BY 8 IMAGE - Poetry Contest
December 30, 2014
visual 2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:17 AM
I love the longing & the questioning. Light & Love
A   Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Connie,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Yes, how the years have flown, Connie. I was reminiscing about people in my email to you tonight. Hope it does not bore you too much. I ramble on so much sometimes!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Of course not, I rambled right back. Lol. I have been online for hours reading all the winning poems. I am getting off here now as my eyes have had it. Nite, Connie
Deschler Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Your interpretation of visual 2 was so creative and unique. A wonderful poem, Connie! Congratulations on your first place win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Thank you very much Kelly. I loved yours too. Hugs, Connie
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January 9, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Congrats on your great win...Way to go ..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Thank you Sara. I am really enjoying reading the entries.
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 2:13 PM
Hey, it scored very big indeed, Connie. Wow, congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 4:18 AM
Thanks a lot Andrea. I seldom have the top honor, so it is a sweet gift to start out my new year. Hugs, Connie
Fraser Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 12:38 PM
As I read, instant images off Virgin Planets I see before me. They are there, lets hope we don't poison them like we do here. I'm smiling re-reading Connie. Mega deserved congratulations as your poem graces the breeze, caressing the clouds to land in my favourites - James :)xx
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January 9, 2015 at 4:23 AM
How sweet of you James. Thank you for your lovely comment and for fav'ing my poem. Hugs, Connie
Guzzi Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 8:35 AM
So nice to see your excellent verse in the #1 spot. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 4:21 AM
Thank you very much Debbie. I seldom have that honor so I am happy to begin my new year this way. Love, Connie
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Wonderful write, Connie, and congratulations on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Thank you very much Eve. I am still reading the entries. Hugs, Connie
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Connie, what a wonderful way to do this contest! Love it! Congratulations on your top win! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Thank you very much Sandra. Hugs, Connie
Nance Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Grats on your win!! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Thank you much Casarah. I have to go read every one's poems. Hugs, Connie
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 1:57 PM
Wow I missed this when first posted - such a creative write in so few words - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:47 PM
Thanks very much Jan. I have been seeing many of your wonderful wins, so congratulations on your wins too my friend. Hugs, Connie
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January 7, 2015 at 9:49 AM
WooHoo, I am so happy to see you at the top of the field. This is so creative, so imaginative and so beautifully penned. A Fav! Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE WIN!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Thank you very much for being happy for me Armand. Your sentiments mean a lot to me. I seldom come in at the top so it is a real honor that I am thrilled with. Hugs, Connie
Kayode Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:45 AM
This is just too fantastic,congrats Connie...huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:52 PM
How sweet of you KAYOD5. Thank you very much my friend. Hugs, Connie
Onclaud Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:42 AM
so impressed by your other world, connie... thanks for lighting my contest and big congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Thank you Nette for making my day and choosing my poem along with RAJAT'S in the top placement. I am feeling under the weather today and this really cheered me. Hugs, Connie
Mehta Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:22 AM
I just love this lovely write, congrats on the win, Connie
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram. Hugs, Connie
Jerden Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Very nice, Connie. I like the idea of a phantom world outside the laws of physics... Congratulations on your 1st place finish!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Thank you very much Roy. It seldom happens so it really cheered me. Hugs, Connie
A. Sharma Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 4:17 AM
Lovely write Connie! congrats on top place win! Wish u a very happy new year!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Happy new year to you too Dr. Sharma. Thank you very much. Hugs, Connie
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January 7, 2015 at 3:34 AM
take my best wishes Connie.Hope you are okay. Congratulations on win.Love >>>>rajat
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:41 PM
Thank you very much Rajat. love, Connie
Callus Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Lovely write Connie! #7 You have got me wondering, too! Are there nice people like you on it?:) All the best and gl in the contest. // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Why thank you Paul. I seldom get a top placement so this made me very happy. Hugs, Connie
Callus Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Hi Connie! How lovely to see you at the very top of the winners' list with this Sister World entry!! Congratulations!!! // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 2:36 AM
You say the nicest things Paul. I appreciate your comments much. Thank you. I think you have one too? I will have to go see. Connie
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:22 PM
this one is really cool, connie. glad to see you entering different contests lately.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 5:54 PM
Thank Andrea. I never expected this to win big and it made my day. Hugs, Connie
Nance Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Wonderful entry. best of luck sweetie :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Thank you Casarah. Have a wonderful New Year!
Kiser Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 3:27 PM
I really love this. I believe that it may be just as beautiful.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 7:48 PM
Thank you M.L. I hope it is good enough. Hugs, Connie
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