2am

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Arthur Vaso.

side notes of sadness

So many have loud voices

no one rejoices

do they even ponder the harm?

or think is charm?

they protest, what they actually are?

one day, one man, will say sorry

that will be enough, for one at a time

a victory

2am In a lost world vineyards doze fatigued anticipation of the next poem or next breath Until then I breathe for you my brother I breathe and dream as best one can for maladies to fly away and poets to soar in skies of imaginations where we are formerly introduced by Nuwas us two

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/26/2019 9:25:00 PM

Nice job in a lost world :) thanks for reading my " Betrayed" poem :)

Lifes' Tapestry

Date: 10/18/2018 1:54:00 PM

Lovely, and I truly enjoyed the side notes.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/15/2018 5:57:00 AM

"I breathe for you my brother" - what a great way to express caring.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/13/2018 9:23:00 PM

Your thoughts hold me close, as there are so many emotions to caress. Each one tugs at my heart deeply. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/13/2018 4:45:00 PM

beguiling insights that show how you care, arthur... i so resonate; lovely!..huggs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/13/2018 8:36:00 AM

:( We all listen , but we all have different ways of showing emotion not wanting to hurt anyone .. that is what makes us us. I too stay awake and ponder with tears of everyone's lives and pray they all find the wisdom and the guidance to follow the right path in their lives.