Notes About The Poem

side notes of sadness

 

So many have loud voices

no one rejoices

do they even ponder the harm?

or think is charm?

they protest, what they actually are?

one day, one man, will say sorry

that will be enough, for one at a time

a victory

 

 

 

 

 

 

2am

2am

In a lost world
vineyards doze
	      fatigued anticipation
of the next poem
or next breath

Until then
I breathe for you
my brother

I breathe and dream
as best one can
for maladies to fly away

and poets to soar in skies
of imaginations
where we are formerly introduced
	by Nuwas

us two
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Duncan Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Nice job in a lost world :) thanks for reading my " Betrayed" poem :)
Tapestry Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Lovely, and I truly enjoyed the side notes.
Krampe Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 5:57 AM
"I breathe for you my brother" - what a great way to express caring.
Nicole Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Your thoughts hold me close, as there are so many emotions to caress. Each one tugs at my heart deeply. ~ Brandy
Onclaud Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 4:45 PM
beguiling insights that show how you care, arthur... i so resonate; lovely!..huggs
Roper Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 8:36 AM
:( We all listen , but we all have different ways of showing emotion not wanting to hurt anyone .. that is what makes us us. I too stay awake and ponder with tears of everyone's lives and pray they all find the wisdom and the guidance to follow the right path in their lives.
Turner Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Some wonderful thoughts you have shared here, Arthur.
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:56 PM
Lovely, Art!
Jones Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Nice one art ^_^ loved this
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Lovely x
White Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thank jou <3 :)
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Thought provoking side notes Art and the second poem is a beautiful tribute my friend - I'm sure he will love it!:-) hugs jan xx
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