2 Sides To Love

I will send my Love thru timeless space
No other emotion shall take its place
And as it lands on the many moons
You will see explosions of their crusted dunes

I shall send it to the vivacious Venus
As she prays nothing comes between us
But some will fall on the warring Mars
As he erupts with rage and leaves love scars

And if it should fall on the planet Jupiter
All will be absorbed by its custodian Lucifer
There are many sides from this heavenly view
Hopefully my Love will make its way to you

Two sides to Love two sides to live
One will receive and the other shall give.


March.04.2016   ^WW^
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Zubair Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 2:52 PM
As is energy imbibed, so it will be emanated as it just changes its form but can never succumb
Warrior Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Thank you my friend samiha...for your comment and kind words...god bless...(:^WW^:)
Zubair Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 2:53 PM
A favourite 7
Lane Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:26 AM
I applaud both of you, gentlemen. A wonderful sonnet, WW. Sending your love "thru timeless space" makes it eternal. Beautifully worded. And to Walter for his lovely poem...I visited and loved it, too.
Warrior Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thank you my dear Lady Lin...it is a honor to be applauded by your presence...and I believe my brother Walter would agree...your obedient servant (bowing) oh my back lol...^WW^
Ashe Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 9:35 PM
WOW!
Warrior Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Thank you my friend Walter...I also salute you...and your heart just became bigger...together we can make an impact on the world...our words have power more than we know...keep fighting the good fight...with admiration...^WW^
Ashe Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Why do words fail when they are needed to be spoken the most? Winged Warrior I am totally in a word void. This is an absolute honor what you have created!!! Your topic and flow have taken me to heights and depths of feelings all at the same time! I am not wearing a hat right now but if I were I'd put on two just to take them both off over this! Thank you Sir and Winged Warrior....Write On Sir....Write On!!! :-) :-) WOW!!!!
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