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Thank You All...at Poetry Soup...to my friends and new friends...for all your Love and support...and I would like to thank the Academy-God...oops that's the wrong speech... you really know how to choke a guy up lol...respect and love...^WW^

This sonnet was inspired by my new found friend with a giant heart...Walter T.Ashe...he let me use a line from his verse "The Heartbeat Of A Broken Heart" the line "two sides to love" which I used for the tittle and followed through on the sonnet...thank you my friend...

I will send my Love thru timeless space
No other emotion shall take its place
And as it lands on the many moons
You will see explosions of their crusted dunes

I shall send it to the vivacious Venus
As she prays nothing comes between us
But some will fall on the warring Mars
As he erupts with rage and leaves love scars

And if it should fall on the planet Jupiter
All will be absorbed by its custodian Lucifer
There are many sides from this heavenly view
Hopefully my Love will make its way to you

Two sides to Love two sides to live
One will receive and the other shall give.


March.04.2016   ^WW^

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/9/2016 2:52:00 PM
As is energy imbibed, so it will be emanated as it just changes its form but can never succumb
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Date: 3/22/2016 1:36:00 PM
Thank you my friend samiha...for your comment and kind words...god bless...(:^WW^:)
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Date: 3/9/2016 2:53:00 PM
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Date: 3/5/2016 2:26:00 AM
I applaud both of you, gentlemen. A wonderful sonnet, WW. Sending your love "thru timeless space" makes it eternal. Beautifully worded. And to Walter for his lovely poem...I visited and loved it, too.
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Date: 3/5/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you my dear Lady Lin...it is a honor to be applauded by your presence...and I believe my brother Walter would agree...your obedient servant (bowing) oh my back lol...^WW^
Date: 3/4/2016 9:35:00 PM
WOW!
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Date: 3/4/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend Walter...I also salute you...and your heart just became bigger...together we can make an impact on the world...our words have power more than we know...keep fighting the good fight...with admiration...^WW^
Date: 3/4/2016 9:33:00 PM
Why do words fail when they are needed to be spoken the most? Winged Warrior I am totally in a word void. This is an absolute honor what you have created!!! Your topic and flow have taken me to heights and depths of feelings all at the same time! I am not wearing a hat right now but if I were I'd put on two just to take them both off over this! Thank you Sir and Winged Warrior....Write On Sir....Write On!!! :-) :-) WOW!!!!
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