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2 Haiku and a Senryu

Oh Great Mystery
Let me not forget myself
within my own prayers

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Warm sun hits my face
hyacinth fragrant breezes
peonies dancing

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Dancing Peonies
pink and purple faces sway
winking gracefully

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October 13, 2009 at 1:52 PM

I can see why so many stopped by to comment on this series. The opening stanza is of deep thought and the rest creative imagery for an interesting view. Nice use of personification to leave the reader smiling in the last haiku. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Robin L. Gass

October 12, 2009 at 5:02 AM

Beautiful work, Trudy! Your imagery is lovely and I really like how you set this up and the creative title, too. Love, Robin

Debbie Guzzi

October 6, 2009 at 4:40 PM

lovely scene! Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

October 6, 2009 at 4:31 PM

wonderful, i like the way you puy it together

James Fraser

October 5, 2009 at 1:39 PM

Kool write Trudy, a most enjoyable read - go girl >> James,x

Carolyn Devonshire

October 5, 2009 at 12:58 PM

A brilliant combination of both forms, Trudy! What lovely images you offer to readers. Love, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo

October 5, 2009 at 10:55 AM

These are wonderful Trudy! Just beautiful and I especially love the first one. Looking forward to reading more of your art! Hugs, Izzy

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 5, 2009 at 9:27 AM

Trudy, these are truly beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing them with us. Love, Carol

P Sheart

October 5, 2009 at 8:42 AM

Oh so beautiful. Love the first three lines. Thanks for sharing, smile. Love Light Truth Patty

Carrie Richards

October 5, 2009 at 8:22 AM

Such colorful and gentle writing! Nicely done, Trudy! ~ Carrie

Jared Pickett

October 5, 2009 at 6:33 AM

Good write here friend....2 Haikus and a Senryu....I have a similar write "Random Thoughts 22 Double Haiku to Double Senryu" You should check it out.......:JP]