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2 Haiku and a Senryu

Oh Great Mystery Let me not forget myself within my own prayers *** Warm sun hits my face hyacinth fragrant breezes peonies dancing *** Dancing Peonies pink and purple faces sway winking gracefully

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Date: 10/13/2009 1:52:00 PM

I can see why so many stopped by to comment on this series. The opening stanza is of deep thought and the rest creative imagery for an interesting view. Nice use of personification to leave the reader smiling in the last haiku. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/12/2009 5:02:00 AM

Beautiful work, Trudy! Your imagery is lovely and I really like how you set this up and the creative title, too. Love, Robin

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/6/2009 4:40:00 PM

lovely scene! Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 4:31:00 PM

wonderful, i like the way you puy it together

James Fraser

Date: 10/5/2009 1:39:00 PM

Kool write Trudy, a most enjoyable read - go girl >> James,x

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/5/2009 12:58:00 PM

A brilliant combination of both forms, Trudy! What lovely images you offer to readers. Love, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 10/5/2009 10:55:00 AM

These are wonderful Trudy! Just beautiful and I especially love the first one. Looking forward to reading more of your art! Hugs, Izzy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2009 9:27:00 AM

Trudy, these are truly beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing them with us. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 10/5/2009 8:42:00 AM

Oh so beautiful. Love the first three lines. Thanks for sharing, smile. Love Light Truth Patty

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/5/2009 8:22:00 AM

Such colorful and gentle writing! Nicely done, Trudy! ~ Carrie

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/5/2009 6:33:00 AM

Good write here friend....2 Haikus and a Senryu....I have a similar write "Random Thoughts 22 Double Haiku to Double Senryu" You should check it out.......:JP]

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/5/2009 1:15:00 AM

Beautiful work Trudy, Great senryu and awesome haikus...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 11:13:00 PM

Love the first Haiku. Sometimes in life we get so busy that we forget ourselves. Love the descriptiveness. Keep writing. Sara