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New shoes time again!

Let me walk awhile in you,

before you pinch my toes.

happynew yearhaiku

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Lenny Gazbowski

April 10, 2016 at 8:36 PM

Enchanting haiku Darlene.

Darlene Gifford

April 12, 2016 at 7:32 PM

Thank you, Lenny. Thanks for reading me.

David William Breidenthal

January 14, 2016 at 12:07 PM

Awesome haiku! & adorable :)

Darlene Gifford

January 14, 2016 at 12:45 PM

Thanks, I hope this year will fit you perfectly.

Arlene Binner

December 31, 2015 at 6:32 PM

I don't know anything about Haiku. I just know that I REALLY enjoyed this one.

Darlene Gifford

January 2, 2016 at 9:42 AM

So true, Arlene, you don't have to know anything about Haiku to enjoy it! And thanks for liking this one. Also, the comments I received and the puns that were created by others about this poem are as, or even better, than my Haiku! Hope you read them, too. Also, I am reading some of your Christian poems and enjoying them. I'm happy to include you as a Christian friend and poet. ~~~Darlene

Maurice Yvonne

December 24, 2015 at 6:49 PM

You can walk in me anytime you'd like. I can shoe you how. Sorry I couldn't resist that silly pun. I hope you take no offence. I didn't mean to be a heel. I have no excuse it's Christmas Eve but frankly I'm not even laced. I'd be scared to go toe to toe with you. So don't give me the boot. I think you should patent this one. I'm running out of space so on a serious note this is a great modern Haiku with an original twist. I love it. Happy Holidays, lots of love Armand.

Darlene Gifford

December 25, 2015 at 11:05 AM

Wow, Maurice, You sure had fun with this one. I really enjoyed all your puns, which you are a master at!!! Merry Christmas and hope your New Year is a shoe in. Blessings, ``Darlene