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29 Words

Terrified I cowered deep in closet. He was coming. My panic increased with each passing second. The door opened!! His words became audible. "Gotcha!" "Perfume!" "A DEAD give away." 29 words. No repetitions won 9th place

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Date: 9/29/2010 8:49:00 PM
CAn't tell if it 's hide and seek or a BAD man got ya!! VERy good one though. Congratulations on your win, Joyce. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/25/2010 12:01:00 PM
love it , congrats on your win in the closet, I mean contest
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Date: 9/24/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:31:00 PM
excellent Joyce ! well done and congrats to you! No reps--that's great!
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:29:00 AM
Whew for that-, sneaky perfume-!! Enjoyed this one as well Joyce! A fun take on the challenge-- congrats on your win :) --nikko :)
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:26:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win in Nikko's contest... another great win .for another excellent poem.. enjoy with luv my friend...
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Date: 9/11/2010 4:31:00 AM
What a delight! Good luck in the contest...Take care ~Deb
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:44:00 PM
I love it Joyce, good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:02:00 PM
You make this 29-word thing seem fun.
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