Joyce Johnson Poet Free verse

29 Words

Terrified I cowered deep in closet.
He was coming.
My panic increased with each passing second.

The door opened!!
His words became audible.
"Gotcha!"

"Perfume!"
"A DEAD give away."



29 words.  No repetitions  won 9th place

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Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2010 at 8:49 PM CAn't tell if it 's hide and seek or a BAD man got ya!! VERy good one though. Congratulations on your win, Joyce. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts September 25, 2010 at 12:01 PM love it , congrats on your win in the closet, I mean contest

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2010 at 11:30 AM Congratulations on your win Joyce in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne September 23, 2010 at 5:31 PM excellent Joyce ! well done and congrats to you! No reps--that's great!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 23, 2010 at 12:50 PM Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 23, 2010 at 11:29 AM Whew for that-, sneaky perfume-!! Enjoyed this one as well Joyce! A fun take on the challenge-- congrats on your win :) --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 23, 2010 at 11:26 AM Congrats Joyce on your win in Nikko's contest... another great win .for another excellent poem.. enjoy with luv my friend...

Deb Wilson September 11, 2010 at 4:31 AM What a delight! Good luck in the contest...Take care ~Deb

Francine Roberts September 10, 2010 at 11:44 PM I love it Joyce, good luck in the contest

Hyle Chu September 10, 2010 at 9:02 PM You make this 29-word thing seem fun.