28:06:42:12 Or the Red Death

"28:06:42:12" OR "the red death"


hookah's pookha
hocus pocus
an opium dream
or backyard rabbit

sincerely Sinclair
habitate but not quite
suburban but a matter
of fact so i ask:

red rover red rover
come over to eat 
some crimson 
clover and 

relax
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Situation Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Is this a mix of bible verses and mysticism?
Connelly Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Donnie Darko; Harvey, and one of the rabbits in my yard. Thanks for commenting
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:37 PM
I’ve never chased a White Rabbit, fallen down a hole I couldn’t crawl out of, or been inquisitive enough to open notes not meant for me. But I enjoy wearing a Cheshire Cat grin and having people wonder why.
Lane Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 12:08 PM
I’d welcome constructive criticism. Not drivel or something insincere
Connelly Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 11:46 AM
That cat was the best Lin lololol
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