24 Hours

24 Hours

Just 24 hours ago I was SMILING & full of HAPPINESS
24 hours later lost & lonely because its YOU that I miss
Than in comes the  CRUSHING pain & dispair
The reason for these feelings?cuz YOUR not lying there
Its just another morning minus all of the GOOD
Love waking uo to you do it every day if I could
Was that real or just a crazy dream went by all to FAST?
Wish there a way to rewind so I could live in the past
Than YOU would be MINE for just one more day
All this Lonliness I feel your love would wash away
Instead alone & empty filled w sadness & grief
Everytime were together the time is all too brief
You fill me with a happiness that I have  never known
Want you to stay forever want to make you all my OWN
BUT first their are a few obstacles that stand in our way
 Dont worry my Love we will get to our "someday"
The joy that comes when you are near makes my heart  truly melt
You fill me with such EMOTION like NOTHING I ve ever felt
Never dreamed a Man made for me walked along this earth
I promise to CHERISH our love & always  PUT our relationship FIRST
The beauty and generosity I see in YOU is a work of art
You have enamored me compleatletley  & healed my woundrd heart
You have made me realize what I often fail to SEE
Your Love has given me hope & made me believe in ME
I so admire your drive strength & ambition
YOUR unconditional love the best gift ive ever been given
Thank You for caring so much & traveling  all this way
I am so touched & honored your my MAN sometbing I want to say
You are my best friend and my Soulmate its so very TRUE
I would be tbe LUCKIEST girl on tbe planet to spend my life with YOU

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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