23rd

“The Lord is my Shepherd”
Unless there’s somewhere I want to go
I pretend I’m seeking guidance 
Yet my pace doesn’t slow.

“I Shall not want”
But really I know that isn’t true
My appetites are plenty
and I crave what is new

“He maketh me to lie down in green pastures:”
Still I am so quick to rise
My Father resides in Heaven
Why do I choose the prince of lies.

“He leadeth me beside the still waters.”
From which I should drink
My soul cries out to be quenched
But it’s blocked by the things I think.

“He restoreith my soul:
So why do I stray
Just a foolish sheep
Who wants to go my own way

“he leadeth me in the paths of righteousness
for his name’s sake.”
I’m willfully foolish
with each step that I take

“Yea though I walk through the valley 
of the shadow of  death. 
I will fear no evil:”
As I take in each breath.

“for Thou art with me;”
You haven’t let me go
By softening my heart
you free me to grow

“Thy Rod and thy staff they comfort me”
I no longer fear your correction
Yours is an abiding Love
I’m under your protection

“Thou preparest a table before me
In the presence of my enemies:”
They cannot harm me
I’m as safe as a summer breeze

“Thou anointest my head with oil:
My cup runneth over.”
I no longer seek foolish things
With You I walk among clover 

“Surely goodness and mercy
shall follow me 
all the days of my life:
And I will dwell in the house of the Lord 
Forever.”

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Date: 6/27/2021 5:45:00 PM
Hello Richard … it takes a very creative mind to write a verse like this - well done Richard - Lindsay
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Date: 6/20/2021 10:07:00 AM
What a creative write on the 23. Love your line, "Just a foolish sheep." We are wanting to do it our way. Have a blessed day/week writing away.....................
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Date: 6/20/2021 6:36:00 AM
I like this one. A great account of your faith. We start small and grow to be a different person as time passes by. If only we could be just zapped with instant success at being the Christian we should be, but alas we are human. Thanks for all the visits to my p age. I still have to fight with Satan who would lead me the wrong way. Sara
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:52:00 AM
An excellent personal interpretation of this popular psalm, Richard. I love the determination and faith which the ending projects. ~ Regards // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2021 7:14:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 6/13/2021 9:58:00 AM
Though we struggle to trust, God remains faithful. Enjoyed your transition from human weakness to abiding in God's strength.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Juliet, sorry for the late response. ;0)
Date: 6/6/2021 7:56:00 AM
Hi Richard, You penned a real and honest interpretation of the 23rd Psalms. The latter portion shows the results of one staying steadfast, your poems shows a heart change- answered prayer. I enjoyed the read. I liked this a lot. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2021 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Alexis. Hugs Rick.
Date: 6/3/2021 8:53:00 PM
Richard, Wonder in a psalm and a poem. "Watch and pray so that you will not fall into temptation. The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak.” Those born into sin know (hope) they're more of a guide than Uber directions to the stars. -Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2021 7:08:00 AM
I really like this response Rich. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 6/3/2021 7:02:00 AM
Lovely. I like how you have included your own thoughts and musing to this amazing Psalm. Blessings.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2021 7:09:00 AM
Thanks for the blessings Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Date: 6/2/2021 8:10:00 AM
Richard this is a wonderfully honest exposition on the 23rd Psalm.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2021 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Kenneth. Blessings Rick.
Date: 6/1/2021 1:45:00 PM
A great inspiring sermon that only a man of true faith could compose, my dearest friend, Richard. I know you for almost ten years now and your faith remains forever strong! Blessings!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thanks my friend. Faith is only as valuable as what you put your faith into. I am thankful I have Faith in God.
Date: 6/1/2021 1:37:00 PM
As we go through life we often question things about our faith and quite often sometimes stray from the path we should be taking. Thankfully we see the light and are soon back on course. Well written Richard. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thanks for your encouraging response Tom. Blessings Rick.
Date: 5/30/2021 2:38:00 PM
I can relate to your interpretations and the struggles of remaining faithful to Him. But the perseverance you describe in continuing to walk the path of faith, and the wonderful reward is dwelling “in the house of the Lord forever”! Wonderful Psalm and wonderful poem, Richard! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thanks Laura. ;0)
Date: 5/29/2021 9:34:00 PM
Perhaps, a double-twist on a coming-of-age write here, Richard. Fabulous penning. Truly enjoyable. Happy Sunday, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2021 6:26:00 AM
Hi Gershon, thanks for the visit.
Date: 5/29/2021 6:32:00 PM
It is indeed one of my fav psalms of all time, Richard, Thanks for sharing :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2021 6:26:00 AM
Thanks dear. Hugs Rick.
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