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On the bed, He doesn't look fine. Doctor said, "He's flatline."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/1/2010 2:51:00 PM
ahhh i love this poem i think i'm gonna have to say its my favorite one! besides 4 years in june i love that one too.
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:32:00 AM
So sorry for your loss. A good poem, though. Nicely crafted. We had a loss not that long ago as well so I empathize. My thoughts go to you Tony
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:00:00 AM
oh my goodness- edward
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