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2-16-10 Connection

My heart skipps a beat, My mind, on the gorgeous hazel sunfilled eyes of my love, recapturing the moments in my mind, where we made love, without making love. skin pressed to skin, lips pressed to lips, eyes never wavering, staring endless; our voices quiet and weak, whispering words of compassion true, through the softly lit moans, crying i love you.

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Date: 2/17/2010 11:25:00 AM
oh wow rain this poem is so sweet it speaks to all sides of love, like lust , or longing, or feeling like every thing will be ok as long as you can reach over and touch his hand. great great write rain as always you do not disappoint! =)jo
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Date: 2/17/2010 6:17:00 AM
You have presented to us very beautiful poetry today .Rain It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:39:00 PM
Nice portrayal of love
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:54:00 AM
Very passionate write that you have penned here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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