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Part 2 to "My Mind is Yours"

1 Year Later I Do Not Breath Part 2

I Do not Breath

I do no think Of life that mocked me I do not think Of elders who forgot me I do not think Of my depression I do not think Of hell on earth I do not think at all Anymore I shall hang from the rafters You can all laugh now
I am as dead As when I was alive No difference at all Bury me in that poppers grave Beside the man of god who was the devils slave He is in hell, and there shall I reside too Taunting his perversions for all of eternity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 10:17 PM
your darkness turns me on :)
Vaso Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 10:20 PM
Are you roping me in here? :) Thanks so much Cas! :) hugs xoxo
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:32 AM
From the picture she looks a bit like death warmed up Arthur:- Is a poppers grave for rich paupers who need to get high? Seriously a deep and powerful write my friend:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Nunez Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Intrigued by the number of views, now I know why. Darn dark and "light" poetry has everyone in a frenzy...Awesome though for me...::D Kim
Trifiatis Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 1:24 AM
When we reach that low point of our life then a way remains: UPWARDS! A great poem depicting the struggle in our souls, a struggle that proves the dynamism in us, this innate power that will liberate us from the chains of despair! Deep and powerful dear, Arthur! A seven!
Manassian Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Superb....I believe there are those who are walking dead. Life can be so cruel, Arthur. Great write....Shouldn't there be an E after breath? Hugs
Vaso Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Yes I do believe you are correct, poor girl was so dead she forgot the darn E !!!! Hugs!
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