1 With Anguish

Thank you for your patient, kind bliss…
I want to make you happy, you see? 
I don’t want to hear you, speaking words of worthlessness 
I want to see you be free…you’re my cup of hot, sweet, iced tea 
Can’t you see? I loved you for so, so long…yet, I feel that it as more of an infatuation 
My condolences to you for missing your loved one…I wish you good luck… and I wish you brighter days and dreams of nostalgic-less, moving reality 

Though I’m one with anguish and bitter rue
I still feel for you…oh don’t be blue
I, as well, have lost my other shoe
I didn’t know how to help you; but, that’s nothing new
Weren’t you one with anguish too? 

Didn’t you know I as one with anguish?
Didn’t you feel me in your heart?
Didn’t you know that I as struggling? My only wish 
Is to be with you…from the start 
Didn’t you know I as one with anguish?
Didn’t you feel me in your heart?
Didn’t you know that I as struggling? 

My only wish 
Is to be with you…pound to the rhythm of my heart…
and...please...don’t rip my young heart apart 

Feeling you shatter out of nowhere…
I found myself, thinking of you…left here…
You sheltered me hen there as a rainstorm 
I was digging deep in the soil…like an earthworm 

Though I’m one with anguish and bitter rue
I still feel for you…oh don’t be blue
I, as well, have lost my other shoe
I didn’t know how to help you; but, that’s nothing new
Weren’t you one with anguish too? 

Didn’t you know I as 1 with anguish?
Didn’t you feel me in your heart?
Didn’t you know that I as struggling? My only wish 
Is to be with you…from the start 
Didn’t you know I as one with anguish?
Didn’t you feel me in your heart?
Didn’t you know that I as struggling? My only wish 
Is to be with you…pound to the rhythm of the drums that pound repetitively in my head minutes after midnight…breaking apart …drifting away in the death cart

Didn’t you feel my love tonight, baby? 
You’re as blue as the sinuous, despairing sea…
I’m the waves of emotions...please don’t pity me  
I didn’t know how to help you; but, that’s nothing new
I, as well, have lost my other shoe…but my happiness is as fresh and true as morning dew
I still feel for you…oh don’t be blue…or sick with the love flu 
Though I’m one with anguish…I’m the color black…white is what I lack…I’m the darkest hue of grey…boohoo…I was never apart of his crew…or her crew  

My condolences to you for losing your boyfriend… I feel bad for you…sadly…
I’m one with anguish…I feel your bleakness blanket over me w-wistfully 
Please…please hand me your love-kerchief, I don’t want your money, your fame, your success or your exhilaration…
I just want you… to spread your wings, like a bird, taking wing from on high for the very first time…soaring with triumph and anticipation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/5/2014 5:24:00 AM
(this poem was written without a 'w' letter due to a keyboard that was dysfunctional a tad...I couldn't write that letter...grr...)
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