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1953 Ford Truck

In my travels around.... from town to town... I found sitting next to a tree... a red truck for sale... that looked like _ell! a ford, nineteen fifty-three... So I knocked on the door... and wasn't for sure... if they'd sell it to me... When they answered the door... they wanted more... but I gave them two-fifty, not three... I got it running at last... and oh! what a task! I couldn't wait to set it free... Yea!! it's really fast... when I give it the gas... ask those cops who gave tickets to me! The body's intact... just one ding and a whack!! I'll paint it just wait and see!!!

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Date: 12/6/2016 4:56:00 AM
Almost forgot to rate this a 7 it was the best poem I read today and sorry I'm my previous comment I meant give ask those cops who give tickets to me I think it got omitted
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Date: 12/6/2016 4:54:00 AM
Firstly I want to say that this is brilliant and I believe you are gifted as a writer I really got a good feeling from this poem because we all have our thing don't we! By the way I think in the pasting or typing of your poem you may have omitted the word who in ask those cops who give tickets to me
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Date: 3/3/2013 8:40:00 AM
Lawrence, many blessings on your featured poem this passed week. Have yourself a new and awesome week.:-) Always & Forever * LINDA
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