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1950's Traffic Jam Revised

We had a car, not many did, financed and fuelled by bread and jam, food deprivation that I hid from jealous kids who’d mock the sham; pride misjudging as a winner Ford denoting "Forfeit dinner" So while, no doubt, they envied me I lusted their hot Sunday lunch as they inhaled mum’s recipe for dishes needing bite and crunch, whilst dominating our car trips my salivating yearn for chips.

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