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1948 ~ 1983


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Screaming spirit birthed in a capsule of tainted flesh


Silent soma now rests where those who sleep never rise



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Robert Pettit

February 9, 2011 at 5:14 PM

Good fascinating writing here.

Gert W. Knop

February 10, 2010 at 9:08 AM

So much said in these few words, Abe! Keep your pen flowing!...Thanks for your comment and have a good time...Gert

Brian Strand

February 9, 2010 at 8:42 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Abe.Rgds Brian

February 8, 2010 at 6:32 PM

Good use of alliteration! Much between the lines here for the reader to think about. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Charmaine Chircop

February 8, 2010 at 4:24 PM

Good poem indeed,I can read between the lines..excellent..Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 8, 2010 at 4:07 PM

I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Abe. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

February 8, 2010 at 3:58 PM

Interesting Imagism. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Sue Mason

February 8, 2010 at 3:57 PM

Uncanny how first line fits my 1943 birth to an alcoholic capsule .. smile ... and, as for the second it seems that the older I get the more people are sleeping that dirt nap ... poignant writing here, Abe !!