17 Sweet Briar Road - Port of Spain

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Wistful is the heart, silent the walls
    where the gambols of youth echoed.
A return tale’s sentimental journey
  inside the gates of Sweet Briar Road

Long it behoves me my thanksgiving 
    to you, aunties Yvonne and Jocelyn T.
For all the love you showed withal
     and for all the good you saw in me

Hearken the jumbie bird in the night,
        the heat of day and smell of rain.
And QRC bell tower sombre tolled
  the hills and valleys of Port of Spain

The crowd’s roar filled its cricket halls
     on window row to a grandstand view.
And an open door its gates would be
    to weary travellers passing through

By candlelight on evensong sabbath
     I saw hands petitioned in God’s raise.
And among portrait, altar and chattel
  an old ne-gro woman chanted in praise

Downstairs eating pepper mango,
   salt prune and sweet preserved plum.
And upstairs the ghosts of the dead
    a trickery of wind and light become

With long treetop fruit picker in hand
  softly chorused the sound of Greyfriars.
When joyfully as I picked to my ear
    sung the weekly Church Group Choir

Up creaky staircase bedroom chamber,
       pantry annex and old livery quarters.
Home to where my grandfather lived
  with his wife, eight sons and daughters

In Christian soldier evangelical prayer
  waited I for sleep’s silent lull perchance.
O but late by BBC midnight wireless 
       did growl the dogs in lunar trance

I followed the trail back to its past -
      a prodigal son on long returned stay.
When time and fate and the risen sun
       dawned upon a much younger day


        Written: January 1993

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