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16 bars

its a thirst thats hard to quench you did it well, we all draw water from the well in the cellar, to go, inter-stellar in our minds deep dive divine intertwined by the roots we start to slow time but it seems refined the present danced in a line, we had a good rhyme, but rhythm lagged behind, the younger days where spent chasing what we had all aligned, n being set up poor thats a crime, but no time to pull nine's n 16 dimes at a time, the designers be hatching cause they mismatched n cracking but from that flows the static, step up stop the havoc with Matic actionary tactics of maverick's But the beginning was so tragic! SO! let go! The pass is so acid, image be a trap as the picture caps and the future retaps time travel relapse now what image is that? imagination afterwards be tripping like an actor, walking on x factor educated of y is it's so violent to be alive, and peaceful when we die. we asked it nine times and 16 lines he rhymed, the rhythm be forever silent this time.

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Date: 11/10/2016 5:29:00 PM
All of your poems are deep and profound as well as intricately written. You are an amazing poet, Rospel. I would love to feature some of your exquisite work on my blog www.poeticwritings.com You would maintain all rights to your work. Everyone should be reading your poems.
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Date: 11/10/2016 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Christy, i would be honored and what your doing is just awesome, if you think about it, its crazy how with the invention of the internet, for those that mine their minds, you can almost instantly share and realize that there are so many others who's thoughts are now things we can really read.