14 Minutes

Room 5 – that’s where it starts
It is always 14 minutes from being nowhere
You can settle in for liquid cocktails
Ordered up by an oncologist and pharmacist
The mixologist has 10 years experience delivering the Red Devil
No mucking about. She knows how to get you where you are going
And get you there in one ragged piece of your self.
You’ll walk out but your mind and muscles are punked out pieces of meat
It’s like going ten rounds with Ali. Punch drunk from a float and jab
You will watch his feet float like a butterfly and his jab sting like a bee
But you are always 14 minutes away from being nowhere
People will speak, their mouths will move like slow motion action
You will see the spittle and the tongues wagging wildly but again you are still 14 
Minutes away from being nowhere
No one understands
They all care
Or at least they say they do.
Drum roll please!
Strike the drum smartly Ed.
Lower it to the ground
Room 5 – is always where it starts.
And it damn sure is 14 minutes from being nowhere.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/13/2014 4:32:00 PM
What an amazing piece of work; I enjoyed reading immensely! I love the personality, the shadows being cast throughout...it's quite brilliant and the repeating lines are effective and vibrant. Great job; hope all's well. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 11/14/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Laura. All is well. Your comments always inspire me. ~Kilmer
Date: 10/11/2014 2:52:00 PM
Heartfelt creation...Touched my heart...Best wishes from India...
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/11/2014 11:26:00 PM
Thank you Sandip, I appreciate your kind words. ~Kilmer
Date: 10/11/2014 7:42:00 AM
OH my dear..your work tears me apart. What is going on with you? I will worry now until I hear from you. I will never forget "14 minutes from nowhere"". BG
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Date: 10/11/2014 1:04:00 PM
Barbara- I am fine. My daughter has breast cancer and I wrote this after sitting with her while she received chemotherapy. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work and comment on it. Good to hear from you again.~kilmer
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