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for Tania Kitchin's A Fall Or Winter Nature Haiku Poetry Contest

1433 - fall hiku

quick-change artistry 
from gold to crimson to brown . . . 
trees disrobed  wind-blown

autumntreehaiku

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Sotto Poet

December 29, 2025 at 3:03 AM

Lovely haiku, congratulations on your win

Bartholomew Williams

December 28, 2025 at 4:37 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your strong placement with this lovely haiku! Way to go! Very best, Bartholomew

Karen Jones

December 28, 2025 at 5:19 AM

I love the line Trees disrobed! Congratulations

Jenish Somadas

December 7, 2025 at 1:45 AM

a rich and vivid image of fall’s fleeting beauty... Congrats Andrea..

Andrea Dietrich

December 7, 2025 at 8:16 AM

Thank you, Jenish

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

December 6, 2025 at 8:18 AM

Wonderful imageries. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Tania Kitchin

December 6, 2025 at 4:47 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful fall haiku. Enjoyed the imagery of the trees disrobing in the wind.

Krishnanand Guptar

December 6, 2025 at 3:47 AM

Congratulations, dear poetess, on your win in this contest with a lovely Haiku on fall`s change in hues of trees until they are "disrobed". Wishing you the blessings of light.

Christuraj Alex

December 5, 2025 at 9:12 PM

"trees disrobed" - Grand writing. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

November 14, 2025 at 10:48 AM

Love it, Andrea, as "trees disrobe" and colors fade! So creative! Best wishes for the contest. Blessing my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

November 14, 2025 at 10:22 AM

Your "fall artistry" is a wonderful Haiku write. What a great time of the year. "Good Luck" I did, "winter cardinal." Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........