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1418 - Untilted

Written: October 4th, 2025, for Brian Strand Contest

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falling leaves drift—each one a memory unlaced from the breath of time

autumnmonoku

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sara Etgen-Baker

October 4, 2025 at 5:21 PM

a delightful Monoku...loved 'breath of time. best wishes with this contest entry, hugs from Texas, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

October 4, 2025 at 1:42 PM

I enjoyed reading this pretty Monoku write. You told a story in a few words. Less can be more.... "Good Luck" Have a Blessed weekend writing away..........